LINEART ONLY FOR NOW BECAUSE I'M ALREADY LATE WITH THIS SUBMISSION Sorry! D: Play-by-play of the page below...
[Jeshula flies down from the trees; Josh stands up like the others; Imagine rounds up the explaination]
Josh:[quietly, to Lu] 'Opponents'. Very diplomatic. ČuČ
Imagine: Uh-huh! Short stuff here is stuck with me (literally). Captain Abs, you're with the blonde bombshell.Panel 2:
[Establising shot of park]
Chibi!Imagine: BUT HEY! At least we're at the park! I say we have some fun~Panel 3:
Imagine: [Draping herself all over Falconer]
How 'bout it, hottie? Your girlfreind isn't here and I know some GREAT GAMES <3
Illusion: [being the worst bro ever and ignoring Josh's discomfort to comment on the scenery]
You do know this isn't actually JUMP CITY PARK. Just a very good replica. o3oPanel 4:
Strobe: Like a stage?
Illusion: Yes, exactly!Panel 5:
Imagine: And I care why?
Strobe: Don't you get it? This is already a game! Where someone wants us to FIGHT each other!
Imagine: Well that's a STUPID game! D:<Panel 6:
Josh: [Quietly to Jeshula]
Jeshula, even if you can't get far, a BIRDS EYE VIEW might help...
Jeshula: On it!Panel 7:
[Jeshula flies into the air]Panel 8:
MEANWHILE [back in the Eastern quarter]
[Rapid sits by Magenta, waiting like she was told]Panel 9:
[A WILD TIM APPEARS!] Panel 10:
[TIM USES ICE ATTACK! IT MISSES!]
[Rapid high-tails the heck outta there]
Rapid: OHCRAPohcrapohcrapOHCRAPohCrapohcr-Panel 12:
short by magical cuffs]Panel 13:
[Rapid falls down with a THUD; Magenta is encased in ice so Rapid can't just drag her away; Tim steps over Magenta to advance on Rapid...]
Since Magenta is down for the count, that technically makes Rapid the winner of her fight. It also means Tim has been able to use the gem to steal Magenta's powers (but since the gem is broken, it doesn't suck up the whole person like it did in the cartoon episode). I figure Rapid was too freaked out to notice any weird magicy things to go on breifly when Magenta first fainted since she just bolted.
Now Tim is after Rapid C:< If he manages to take her powers with the gem, she'll likewise not be sucked into it, but will be left powerless.
Finally if I can give any advice I say "TALK TO PEOPLE"! Can't express enough how much help it was to talk ideas through...Thank you to the peeps who helped me out with this page, especially ~lilbluestem
who basically helped with half the plot and also corrected some inacuracies in Tim's behaviour and magically made the page 100 times better with it. Hope everyone else's characters are represented alright! I figured Strobe was emerging as the sensible one and Josh and Imagine have a bit of history which explains her behaviour
. Uh, Lucy has super good eye sight so can spot a fake park a mile off. BTW.
I love that Tim thought so carefully about who to pair people with and this little crew is totally not playing by his expectations xD
~ Sheep xx